I think my quick writes

I think my quick writes have improved because now i can write neatly/slopping all because of Mrs Patrick taught me how to write this way.I also learnt how to write properly and not use printed writing words but use this new style in my book it looks really good from what it used to look like .I am really confident to show my book now all because of Mrs Patrick's work she taught me. Thank you Mrs Patrick.

My goal is to get more punctuation and know/check where to put my comma's in the right place.

Comments

Format-Setting my page neatly is hard work for me because i need to make sure i have a ruler to rule off and red pen also if i write words not neatly i re do them.

Content-I write good ideas and add details to support my viewpoints.

Format-Setting out my work well helps others to understand my writing.